tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.comments2015-02-09T02:44:25.698-08:00Short Cuts & VagrantsFreeFoxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-91084435822850764742015-02-09T02:44:25.698-08:002015-02-09T02:44:25.698-08:00I don't suppose the fact that ten years have p...I don't suppose the fact that ten years have passed is particularly significant for you - one day is much like another. I was thinking about you last week, as I often do. You know what to do if you feel like picking up our thread. As always, it would be delightful to hear from you.Bennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-38941270360043049802012-02-07T07:14:53.669-08:002012-02-07T07:14:53.669-08:00Shit - meant to leave a comment here to say I was ...Shit - meant to leave a comment here to say I was thinking of you the other day (4th Feb), as I know it's a significant day for you. Hope you're doing okay.Benhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11965535693027179744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-29006024373743660052011-06-21T10:40:21.380-07:002011-06-21T10:40:21.380-07:00Exactly. Thanks. ^_^Exactly. Thanks. ^_^FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-62848850905832734752011-06-15T12:53:46.706-07:002011-06-15T12:53:46.706-07:00http://www.minderella.com/words/princess.htmhttp://www.minderella.com/words/princess.htmAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-17691413112317391992011-04-29T05:36:44.359-07:002011-04-29T05:36:44.359-07:00@Glenwood: Oh, aye. Ponyboy was... there are few p...@Glenwood: Oh, aye. Ponyboy was... there are few peeps I ever met who were so much just there. I mean, he did H and lied and defrauded the council and all that. But with most peeps their real selves are buried so deep in convention you never get to see them, amına kodun, they probably don't know them themselves. With Ponyboy, it was always bubbling just under the surface. It may have been ugly, but it was real. And I loved him for it.<br />Maybe I'm wrong - never having done it myself - but from those I met and got to know a bit, I got the impression that H users are... well, they are lacking something that protects them from human contact that most other peeps just take fo granted. That H is a way to dampen the pain that normal contact otherwise constantly brings them.<br />How does that match your experiences?FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-23778950233103303822011-04-28T18:57:34.945-07:002011-04-28T18:57:34.945-07:00It never troubles the wolf how many the sheep may ...It never troubles the wolf how many the sheep may be.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-40209828653242556872011-04-22T14:13:07.488-07:002011-04-22T14:13:07.488-07:00That Ponyboy sounds like a right charmer!!That Ponyboy sounds like a right charmer!!Gledwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09308172310486574510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-10350445533868851092011-04-03T13:12:26.595-07:002011-04-03T13:12:26.595-07:00@math:
"yo people/be vicious"
"well...@math:<br />"yo people/be vicious"<br />"well fucking done"<br />o_O?<br /><br />Ah well. Thanks. ^_^FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-50250796605432571762011-04-01T22:31:58.062-07:002011-04-01T22:31:58.062-07:00damn
little late to the party but this is some of ...damn<br />little late to the party but this is some of the hottest shit ive ever read<br />well fucking done<br /><br />xmath+mathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17809801402858612894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-90839592351419158082011-03-14T03:22:36.243-07:002011-03-14T03:22:36.243-07:00@Lance: Welcome. ^_^@Lance: Welcome. ^_^FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-236364183291041052011-03-02T13:35:53.592-08:002011-03-02T13:35:53.592-08:00hi, new to the site, thanks.hi, new to the site, thanks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-82955489742781300482010-11-22T22:39:00.997-08:002010-11-22T22:39:00.997-08:00@ Changeling - Pissed off? Not at all. I didn'...@ Changeling - Pissed off? Not at all. I didn't know I wasn't conversing. You seemed mostly off-line recently (you mentioned some medical thing on DC's, hope you're okay). Want to go mail? ^_^FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-8074098677057700782010-11-22T08:45:21.236-08:002010-11-22T08:45:21.236-08:00- because it's less organised, polished or som...- because it's less organised, polished or something? plus - ponyboy is hotter in the first draft, with his trembling and piano profiency an all...<br />I miss conversing wth you, are you pissed cos i don't reciprocate - uh - satisfatorily? It's lack of aptitude , not interest. I'm forever saying that..Changelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16971293660092708835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-38536919302821531582010-11-19T07:12:53.250-08:002010-11-19T07:12:53.250-08:00@Changeling - not at all... though I'd love to...@Changeling - not at all... though I'd love to know why.FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-33292963059747832072010-11-18T14:10:18.297-08:002010-11-18T14:10:18.297-08:00you know - i kinda liked the 1st version some more...you know - i kinda liked the 1st version some more ... is that fuckin annoying?Changelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16971293660092708835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-76889943312098753732010-11-14T04:03:42.339-08:002010-11-14T04:03:42.339-08:00Shit, I probably want too much, eh? Been thinking ...Shit, I probably want too much, eh? Been thinking about the title, too. Was considering "Famous Last Words" (to Ponyboy, to his father, the comment about not doing "something stupid", what he tries to say with his eyes, etc. Get it? Too obvious? Too obscure?). Of course "DTIS" kinda says the same, what with "Silence is Golden" (like an OD?), and that me writing this down for y'all at all is of course breaking that silence, and PB would have enforced it, with DT no less... funny? Silly? Daft?<br />And those layers - RL Father and Online Daddy, how there is no way to speak meaningfully about either love or death but that it is only our deeds that speak for us. I even cut the reference to PB's rents (via his sheet music and how they made him learn classical music as a kid) and how they were as much present that night as my own were with us in that stinking room of his. And the highlands, should I cut them, too? It seems important to me that as I was about to seek that wild, outdoors freedom I also for the first time in almost 4 years consciously made up my mind to give up on life entirely. As if the elusive presence of the highlands, indeed of the future, is necessary as a bright if distant counterpoint to the black, bloody horror of the sex and destructive romance... but does it work that way, or is it only a needless distraction in the end?<br />Shit, I wish there was some way to objectively <i>test</i> a piece of writing somehow...FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-7003012846610275032010-11-08T04:01:19.549-08:002010-11-08T04:01:19.549-08:00Glad you like the vomit, Changeling.
Where do you ...Glad you like the vomit, Changeling.<br />Where do you think the drama & profundity grates? (All instances if you can, the most grating ones if you're in a hurry, please ^_^) What point and/or image do I push too hard? The car-accident orgasm? What is the "shock" of the shock-button I am trying to press?<br /><br />The shit was just, well, I think trying to be honest. For one, the incident this is based on, that's what we used. Also, I dunno, probably unnessary whimsy, but shit really <i>is</i> the best natural lubricant. Beats baby oil, no comparison to spittle. It seemed like the right place to publicise that fact, but you are probably right and that was the wrong call.<br /><br />"I still want you to give some of the very beautiful, powerful and funny images you create here a bit more breathing space, less explanation." Please, tell me where I over-explain!!!<br /><br />"overshadow some of your other work" Yeah, that is why it doesn't work for my Chapter 5. Obviously, to put it into the novel I have to tone it down. And anyway, Edinburgh is also about a second bloke, no sex, just crime, but as much sick beauty and cold love. And I have no idea how to put both into one chapter. But I figured I work them both out as pure and unafraid as I can do it, and then work from there.<br /><br />Anyway, thanks so much for all of this. Great help!!!!! I owe you.FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-64648074327599044042010-11-08T01:41:39.603-08:002010-11-08T01:41:39.603-08:00there's plenty I like here ( shit - like I tho...there's plenty I like here ( shit - like I thought I was monopolising the vomit erotica corner - uh - but here you're hardcore rubbing my face in it :)) So generally, I'm keen on the juxtaposition you present - sad & difficult with a really sweet humour & lightness of touch.<br />there's some points where you kind of dispense with this - I dunno - but trying to milk that much drama & profundity out of fucking grates with me a little. also maybe, pushing some point or image too hard, trying too obviously to press some 'shock' button? like, you know, the shit/lubricant part? (I mean - old fashioned, romantic spit is just a typo away?) I'm just questioning it cos I don't understand it's intention in the context of the piece - like maybe it highlights you're protagonists frame of reference in a way I'm not getting? for me though, it detracts some from the really successful melancholic beauty you build around it - that's really in keeping with the setting.<br /><br />some ways this section takes way more risks with form and content - like the concentrating on the sexual gives you some licence to take more risk elsewhere? I like the more broken text - the flitting between images without feeling the need to plot the exact narrative steps. the character that emerges from the more adventurous prose style has this enhanced complexity and elusiveness that I find more interesting/exciting, or something.<br />trying not to impose my own stylistic patterns on you but I still want you to give some of the very beautiful, powerful and funny images you create here a bit more breathing space, less explanation.<br /><br />not sure it doesn't overshadow some of your other work if you're going to put it next to it? really liked reading it. thank youChangelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16971293660092708835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-13268368431774671822010-11-07T01:53:34.426-07:002010-11-07T01:53:34.426-07:00FreeFox,I'd very much like to talk to you in p...FreeFox,I'd very much like to talk to you in private as well. My e-mail is:orestes.gr.m@gmail.com.<br /><br />I'd appreciate it if you sent me your e-mail, if u want to that is, yeah?<br /><br />Think about it:)<br />respect<br />L.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-60013690783153385922010-11-06T17:29:19.153-07:002010-11-06T17:29:19.153-07:00Yeah, I think it works really well. Great stuff.Yeah, I think it works really well. Great stuff.Paul Curranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16462159683900359050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-67861073746083225582010-11-06T01:40:57.425-07:002010-11-06T01:40:57.425-07:00Wow(is all the boy could say)
Amazing stuff. why ...Wow(is all the boy could say)<br /><br />Amazing stuff. why don't you just use this very piece as it is? Don't change it. Not now. It doesn't have to be integrated. Maybe later.<br /><br />That was intense and beautiful and the different time-lines and scenes blending into each other...Loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-74901478698585433382010-10-28T10:13:07.653-07:002010-10-28T10:13:07.653-07:00I've 'borrowed' your pic for a post ab...I've 'borrowed' your pic for a post about child abuse on 'Leaving the Grey Room'. I hope you don't mind - it just seemed so relevant to a report which says that in recent child abuse investigations they haven't been listening enough to the kids.<br /><br />Thank you.<br /><br />If you would like to email me I'll be very happy to try to discuss those other issues with you.<br /><br />Take care.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7178393725043233213.post-55649848311300819082010-10-23T02:41:59.169-07:002010-10-23T02:41:59.169-07:00"I betrayed you in the end, like you had alwa..."I betrayed you in the end, like you had always known I would. I lied about everything except about that. I told you from the first time we talked that I was a thief, a deceiver, and that I would break your heart if only you let me.<br />You let me."<br /><br />I soooo want to know more, fictionalized or not. also, i've said the same thing too many times i guess but it always worled the other way around. Maybe the heart isn't that deceitful after all,and even in a crook's core lies loyalty.<br /><br />love<br />L.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com